目录

• 大体架构
• 前言
• Protecting environment is very important
• 静态化设计
  • 静态化设计 - 名词化
  • 静态化设计 - 介词化
  • 静态化设计 - 插入语
  • 总结
• It 做形式主语包装
• 假传圣旨
• 无病呻吟
• 非灵主语
• 调查
• 英语二大作文写作
  • 必须记住的单词
  • 引出主题、描述图表
    • 数据中心词
  • 数据变化 - 静态数据描述（饼状图/表格）
    • 占比 - 数据在后
    • 占比 - 数据在前
    • 引出句式
  • 数据变化 - 动态数据描述（柱状图/线状图）
    • 变化
    • 句式
    • 两个变量怎么办？
    • 引出句式
  • 图表评价
  • 引出原因
  • 引出原因的连接词
  • 四大万能理由 ⚠
    • 四大万能理由所需要的必备句型
    • 成长 / 成功 / 发展
    • 知识 / 经历 / 机会
    • 效率 / 便利 / 时间 （个人或社会）
    • 压力 / 健康（身体和心理）
    • 实战一下
  • 调查（第一条理由说完之后）
  • 名人名言（第二条理由说完之后）
  • 升华主题
    • 负面话题
    • 中立话题
  • 建议措施
    • 媒体
    • 政府
    • 个人
  • 展望未来
  • 范文

大体架构

• 第一段：
  1. 引出主题
  2. 描述图表
  3. 评价图片
• 第二段
  1. 重申主题 + 分析原因
  2. 第一条原因 + 调查
  3. 第二条原因 + 名人名言
• 第三段
  1. 升华主题
  2. 建议措施
  3. 展望将来

前言

• eg1:
  • sb do sth
  • sb try to do sth
• eg2:
  • sth be
  • sth tend to （往往常常） be

Protecting environment is very important

下面的笔记围绕这句主题句话来进行全部的包装：

Protecting environment is very important. 保护环境很重要

一般老师提升高级的手法就是换单词，换高级单词比如说：

• Protecting environment is very significant.
• Protecting environment is very essential.
• Protecting environment is very indispensable.
• Protecting environment plays an important role in ...
• 求求你了，老师都看厌倦了

静态化设计

静态化设计 - 名词化

• eg1:

  • sb intend/intends to do sth. 某人打算做某事
  • sb don't/doesn't intend to do sth. 某人不打算做某事（求你了忍住了别写 don‘t 了）
  • 👍 sb have/has intention of doing sth.
  • 👍 sb have/has no intention of doing sth. (否定形式)

• eg2:

  • sth is very popular.
  • 👍 sth have/has/receive/gain great/enormous popularity.

• eg3：轿车所有量从 2010 到 2020 年 激增/骤降了 10%

  • The number of car ownership dramatically increased by 10 % from 2010 to 2020.
  • The number of car ownership steeply dropped by 10% from 2010 to 2020.
  • → 核心词义用名词表达 ：There was + 程度 + 变化 + 范围 + in + 主题（静态语言的魅力）
  • 👍 There was a dramatic increase of 10% from 2010 to 2020 in car ownership.
  • 👍 There was a steep drop of 10% from 2010 to 2020 in car ownership.

静态化设计 - 介词化

• eg1：我今天很开心
  • I‘m very happy. （求你了 ，别这样写了）
  • 👍 I'm in good mood. （be + 介词短语，表状态）
• eg2：年轻人吸烟的比例在增大/下降
  • The proportion of young people smoking has been increasing.
  • The proportion of young people smoking has been declining.
  • → 用 be + 介词短语 替换 ：
  • 👍 The proportion of young people smoking was on the rise.
  • 👍 The proportion of young people smoking was in decline.

静态化设计 - 插入语

• Intelligence, it turns out , is a high-priced option.（2009年完型）
• .... , under any circumstance, .... 无论在任何情况下... （2011年完型）
• Setting a good example for kids , under any circumstance, tends to be of great (enormous) importance .
• ... , in face/ in large part , ....

总结

所以 Protecting environment is very important 怎么利用静态化设计修改？

• → Protecting environment is of importance.

• → Protecting environment is of great/enormous importance.

• → Protecting environment tends to be of great/enormous importance.

• → Protecting environment , under any circumstance, tends to be of great/enormous importance.

• 亮点：修饰化 + 静态化 + 插入语

It 做形式主语包装

• It is generally recognized that ... 人们普遍认为...
• It has been found that... 据研究调查表面
• 所以 Protecting environment , under any circumstance, tends to be of great/enormous importance. 继续完善！
• → ***It is generally recognized that** Protecting environment , under any circumstance, tends to be of great/enormous importance.*
• 亮点：修饰化 + 静态化 + 插入语 + 主从复合句

假传圣旨

As Edward ZlotKowski, director of community service at Bentley College in Massachusetts , puts it , "There has to be of programs . What's needed is a package deal. "

所以我们再完善！

→ ***As Edward ZlotKowski, director of community service at Bentley College in Massachusetts , puts it ,** "It is generally recognized that Protecting environment , under any circumstance, tends to be of great/enormous importance."*

⚠ 自己去找 一个人，一个机构。这个人最好啥话都能说的。As 人名 , 职务+单位 , puts it , "主题句"

无病呻吟

... He may also need money to construct irrigation vessels and improve his farm in other ways. If no surplus is available , a farmer cannot be self-satisfied ... （2000 年完形填空）

• 怎么写？

​ → If（否定）, 主句（否定）

• 否定怎么写？
  1. no + 核心名词
  2. 否定副词：never seldom rarely hardly scarcely
  3. fail to do sth 未能够做某事
  4. 也可以双重否定表肯定：cats never fail to fascinate the human being 猫总是能引起别人的注意

非灵主语

• eg1: The reports came into London Zoo 伦敦动物园收到一封报告

• eg2: 我听到一个好消息

  • I heard a news.
  • 👍 The news came to me.

• eg2: 我有一个想法

  • I have an idea.
  • 👍 An idea came/flashed into my mind.

• eg3: 他丧失了信心

  • He lost his confidence.
  • 👍 Confidence deserted him.

• eg4: 那一夜我无法入眠

  • I could not sleep that night.
  • 👍 That night sleep eluded me.

• eg5: 过去几年，人们见证了一个社会现象：...

  • Over past several years , people have witnessed a social phenomenon that ...
  • 👍 The past several years have witnessed a social phenomenon that ...

调查

• A recent Internet questionnaire of the relevant department indicates that approximately 83.2% of the respondents hold the same view.

• Based upon a recent official report , roughly 86.2% of the respondents hold the same view.

⚠

• 数字自己编哈！最好小数点后面保留一位，更加真实！
• relevant department （有关部门），自己换一下，有关部门有点不真实，换成 全球权威官方 / 民间机构 / 全球著名大学 / 全球著名或权威杂志 （这些机构能发布社会调查的比如中国社科院等等）（友情提醒🈲：写杂志报刊的时候写斜体字）

比如说：

→ A recent Internet questionnaire of the Chinese Academy of Social Sciences indicates that approximately 83.2% of the respondents hold the same view that it is generally recognized that setting a good example for kids, under any circumstance , tends to be of great(enormous) importance .

英语二大作文写作

必须记住的单词

• line chart 曲线图 （第一次出现用 line chart ，第二次可以直接用 chart
• bar chart / column chart 柱状图
• pie chart 饼状图
• table 表格

引出主题、描述图表

数据中心词

• number / figure / statistic / data 数据

可以第一次用 number，第二次用 figure ...，用词一定要多样性

• proportion / percentage 百分比

数据变化 - 静态数据描述（饼状图/表格）

占比 - 数据在后

• take up
• make up
• account for
• gain / occupy
• respectively adv.各自地，分别地

用法：

eg：具体而言，A 和 B 的比例 各自分别占了 15% 和 25%

→ To be specific , the proportion of A and B accounts for 15% and 20% respectively.

（ The percentage = the proportion of ，Specifically = To be specific ）

占比 - 数据在前

• stand for
• be defined as
• be regarded as
• be referred to as

用法：

eg：具体而言，A 和 B 的比例各自分别占了 15% 和 25%

→ To be specific , 15% and 25% are defined as the proportion of A and B respectively .

• 最高比例：the highest percentage / proportion
• 最少的：at the bottom of the chart

⚠ 模板句式：

• A accounts for the highest percentage at x% of 主题词 , followed by B at y% and C , z% . At the bottom of the chart , k% is regarded as D.

A 占了最高比例，紧接着的是 B 和 C（B 占了多少，C 占了多少），占最小的比例是 D（占了多少）

• A accounts for the highest percentage at x% of 主题词 , followed by B at y% and C , z% . Within expectation , the lowest proportion occurs in D at k% .

A 占了最高比例，紧接着的是 B 和 C（B 占了多少，C 占了多少），在我们所预估之内，D 占最低比例（是多少）

引出句式

• The pie chart / table accurately demonstrates a set of data about ...

• The total statistics are divided into ... parts ,

  • among which A accounts for ... + B takes up... , C makes up ... （从句）
  • among which A accounts for ... , while B , C and D take up ... respectively （从句）
  • with A accounting for ... , B taking up ... , C making up ... , （短语）
  • with A accounting for ... and ... defined as B , C and D respectively（短语）

• This is a pie chart which gives / compares information / statistics about ...

• What is explicitly presented in the above pie chart is a set of data ...

数据变化 - 动态数据描述（柱状图/线状图）

常用的程度词：

变化

• increase from 5 in 2010 to 10 in 2020

• increase from 5 to 10 between 2010 and 2020

• increase from 5 to 10 during 2010 and 2020

• increase from 5 to 10 for 10 years between 2010 and 2020

  从多少增长到多少 from .. to ...

• increase by 5 from 2010 to 2020

• increase by 5 between 2010 and 2020

• increase by 5 for 10 years between 2010 and 2020

  增长了多少 by

• is 5 in 2010 , increasing to 10 in 2020

  也可以改变句式，静态描述，现代分词短语作伴随状语

句式

1. 动态：动词 + 副词形式：数据标题 + 副词修饰 + 动词变化 + 范围

   • The number of museums dramatically increased from 4160 in 2013 to 4690 in 2015.
   • The number of museums steeply dropped from 4160 in 2013 to 4690 in 2015.

2. 静态 👍 ：形容词 + 名词形式：

   1. There is + 形容词修饰 + 名词变化 + in 数据标题 + 数据变化

      • There is a dramatic increase in the number of museums from 4160 in 2013 to 4690 in 2015.
      • There is a steep drop in the number of museums from 4160 in 2013 to 4690 in 2015.

   2. 无灵主语：时间 + witness / see + 形容词修饰名词变化 + in 数据标题 + 数据变化

      • The past few years between 2013 and 2015 witnessed a dramatic increase in the number of museums from 4160 to 4690.

      • The past few years between 2013 and 2015 witnessed a steep drop in the number of museums from 4160 to 4690.

        小 tIps：这里用 past few years 准没错，你当然可以具体写是几年，但是我就怕你算错

3. 静态 👍 ：介词 + 形容词 + 名词形式：

   大学生参加兼职的比例一直在增大 / 下降

   → The proportion of students taking part-time jobs is on the rise .

   → The proportion of students taking part-time jobs is in decline .

两个变量怎么办？

⚠模板：变量一描述 S+V+O 关联词 . 变量二描述 S+V+O + during the same period .

关联词

• 相同变化：likewise / similarly / meanwhile / in the same way
• 相反变化：but / yet / however / unfortunate / ironically

eg：具体而言，中国博物馆的数量从 2013 年时的 4160 家缓慢增长到了 2015 年时的 4690 家。与此同时，这期间参观博物馆的人数从 2013 年时的 6.387 亿急剧上升到 7.811 亿

→ To be specific , there was a slow increase from 4160 in 2013 to 4690 in 2015 in the number of museums in China . Meanwhile , the figure of people who visited the museums jumped from 637.8 million to 781.1 million during the same period .

引出句式

1. In the light of the given information , it can be noticed that the number of 数据标题 has been rising consistently .
2. What is illustrated in the table shows clearly that vast change have taken place with 数据标题 .
3. The chart above demonstrates clearly that some changes have taken place in terms of 数据标题 .
4. Based upon the date offered , we can find that the number of 数据标题 has been increasing steadily .
5. It can be seen clearly that vast changes have occurred in respect of 数据标题

也可以对上面句子中的副词、动词、形容词、名词进行替换：

图表评价

• 尽管图表很简单，但其内涵意义很深刻

  Simple as the chart looks , its implicit meaning should be epoch-making.

• 尽管图片简单，但其引申义却发人深省

  Simple as the chart is , its intended meaning is extremely thought-provoking.

• 尽管图表中的数字看似孤立、简单，但应该慎重考虑其内涵

  Isolated and simple as the figures in the chart seem , yet its connotation should be taken into careful consideration.

• ...

引出原因

• 导致该现象的起因可以总述如下

  The contributing factors responsible for this phenomenon can be summarized as follows.

• The phenomenon may be caused by the following factors.

• What exactly contributes to this phenomenon ? It's a thought-provoking question.

• 该情况源于多种原因，然而根本性因素可以在下午看到

  This situation can be traced to a multitude of factors ; the fundamental ones , however , can be sought as follows.

引出原因的连接词

• First of all , in addition , last but not least
• First , what's more , additionally
• In the first place , in the second place
• Firstly , moreover , in addition
• For one thing , for another ...
• On the one hand .... , on the other hand ...
• ...

四大万能理由 ⚠

1. 成长 / 成功 / 发展
2. 知识 / 经历 / 机会
3. 效率 / 便利 / 时间
4. 压力 / 健康（身体和心理）

四大万能理由所需要的必备句型

• Nothing is more important than 主题词 for 四大万能理由

• It is conductive to 四大万能理由

  • 替换：contributes to / be responsible for / advance

• It exerts a positive influence on 四大万能理由

  • 替换：effect / impact 深远的 profound / far-reaching / 不良的 undesirable

• 主题词，as a result of mutiple causes , inevitably brings / offers tremendous benefit / harm to 四大万能理由

• it enables us / our society to acquire 四大万能理由

成长 / 成功 / 发展

• 个人话题：the growth / success / prospect of individual
• 社会话题：the development of economy / society / culture / legal system / environement
  • 家庭环境 family environment
  • 校园环境 school environment
  • 学术环境 academic environment
  • 文化环境 cultural environment

例子：

• 主题词，as a result of multiple causes , inevitably brings tremendous benefits to the growth of individual
• It exerts a positive influence on the development of economy

知识 / 经历 / 机会

• acquire adequate knowledge and experience
• acquiring adequate knowledge and experience
• 替换
  • adequate knowledge
  • useful / extensive experience
  • golden opportunity

例子：

• It is conducive to acquiring adequate knowledge.
• It enables us to acquire useful / extensive experience.

效率 / 便利 / 时间 （个人或社会）

• 效率：
  • efficient learning / studying 或 enhance our work / study efficiency
  • efficent working 或 enhance our work efficiency.
  • 替换：enhance / improve / develop / increase
• 便利
  • give/offer great/tremendous convenience in our life
• 时间
  • waste our precious time and money
  • a total waste of our precious time and money
  • save our precious time and money
  • adv.极大地 greatly / dramatically / significantly / considerably

例子：

• Nothing is more important than 主题词 for saving our precious time and money
• It exerts a positive influence on efficient learning / studying
• It is conducive to offering great / tremendous convenience in our life

压力 / 健康（身体和心理）

• 压力：
  • pressure / stress / stain
  • relieves / moderates a lot of physical and metal stress
  • gives rise to / causes a lot of mental and physical stress
• 健康：

例子：

• It is conducive to relieving / moderating a lot of physical and metal stress
• 主题词，as a result of multiple causes , inevitably brings/offers tremendous benefits/harm to our breath both mentally and physically.

实战一下

2012

注意挑数据来写就行，不要全部都写！又臭又长！挑两个极端就行

• 64.0 % ，定位 → 为什么这么多 41~50 岁的人对工作不满意？
  • 健康问题..
  • 压力太大 ..
  • ...

2013

• 大四学生兼职的同学最多，为什么？
  • 获取工作经验，为就业做准备
  • 有利用个人成长 、成功
  • ...

2014

• 城镇人口越来越多，农村人口越来越少，why？
  • 城市可以给人提供更多的便利
  • 城市给人们提供更多的机会
  • 有利用个人成长、更容易成功...
  • ...

2015

• 春节期间花销比例礼物占比最大为什么？
  • 经济发展
  • 可以给自己更多的机会
  • ...

2016

• 高校学生旅行目的欣赏风景占比最高，为什么？
  • 可以获得更多的知识
  • 缓解压力
  • ...

2017

• 博物馆数量增加了，参观博物馆人数也增加了，为什么？
  • 国家经济发展好有益于博物馆数量增加
  • 人们越来越想获取知识
  • ...

2018

• 消费者选择餐厅时的关注因素，特色、服务占了较高比例，价格比较少，为什么？
  • 经济发展人们对价格不敏感
  • 人们为了更好的体验
  • ...

2019

• 升学人数上升，就业人数下降为什么？
  • 就业压力大
  • 升学有利用个人发展、获取更多的机会....
  • ...

2020

• 某高校学生手机阅读目的，学习知识占比最高，为什么？
  • 学习知识有利用个人发展
  • 学习知识有利用个人成功
  • 学习知识有利用获得更多的机会
  • ...

调查（第一条理由说完之后）

• Depending upon a rough estimate of the relevant department , nearly 86.2% of the respondents hold the same view.

• A recent Internet questionnaire of the relevant department indicates that approximately 83.2% of the respondents hold the same view.

• Based upon a recent official report , roughly 86.2% of the respondents hold the same view.

⚠

• 数字自己编哈！最好小数点后面保留一位，更加真实！
• relevant department （有关部门），自己换一下，有关部门有点不真实，换成 全球权威官方 / 民间机构 / 全球著名大学 / 全球著名或权威杂志 （这些机构能发布社会调查的比如中国社科院等等）（友情提醒🈲：写杂志报刊的时候写斜体字）

比如说：

→ A recent Internet questionnaire of the Chinese Academy of Social Sciences indicates that approximately 83.2% of the respondents hold the same view that it is generally recognized that setting a good example for kids, under any circumstance , tends to be of great(enormous) importance .

名人名言（第二条理由说完之后）

As Edward ZlotKowski, director of community service at Bentley College in Massachusetts , puts it , "There has to be of programs . What's needed is a package deal. "

所以我们再完善！

→ ***As Edward ZlotKowski, director of community service at Bentley College in Massachusetts , puts it ,** "It is generally recognized that Protecting environment , under any circumstance, tends to be of great/enormous importance."*

⚠ 自己去找 一个人，一个机构。这个人最好啥话都能说的。As 人名 , 职务+单位 , puts it , "主题句"

升华主题

⚠ 模板：In view of ( Considering ) all these contributors , we should bear in mind that the great importance should be attached to 主题词

例子:

In view of ( Considering ) every aspect of this (positive/negative) phenomenon , we should bear in mind that people in expanding numbers who enjoy visiting museums will attach utmost significance to obtaining adequate knowledge

负面话题

• 根据以上分析，我们可以得出结论：这一严峻的问题需要有效的应对措施

  Judging from the analysis above , we may safely come to the conclusion that the severe problem demands effective counter-measures.

• 在我看来，我们正处在遏制问题恶化的黄金时期

  From my point of view , we are in a prime time to curb the problem from deteriorating.

• 目前情况是如此严重，是时候采取应对措施解决这个问题

  The current state being so serious , it is high time that we take effective counter-measures to solve the issue.

中立话题

• 应该进一步探索 ... 的优势，但我仍然强烈地认为是时候遏制 .... 的不利影响了

  Advantages of ... should be further explored( implemented ) , but I still strongly maintain that it is time to curb the adverse effects of ...

• 正如所讨论的，我们不难发现，每件事都是一把双刃剑，所以我们应该吸取精华

  As discussed , we have no difficulty in finding that everything is a double-bladed sword and thus we should absorb the essence.

建议措施

媒体

• 报纸和新闻媒体应该宣传报道它

  Newspaper and new media should be planned to launch propagandas of it.

• 报纸和新闻媒体应该揭露和阻止它

  Newspaper and news media should be planned to reveal and prevent it.

政府

• 政府应该完善法律法规来...

  The government should formulate better laws and regulations to do sth

• 政府应该实施各项有关... 的措施

  👍 Implementation of the measures of doing 主题词 should be under way

个人

• 认识到和采取行动

  Everyone should cultivate a better awareness of it and channel actions .

展望未来

• 只有这样，我们就一定会拥有一个更美好的将来

  Only in this way would we be bound for a better future.

• 只有这样，我们的生活将变得更加真实和富有意义

  Only in this way would lives become more real and meaningful

范文

​ What is illustrated in the table shows clearly that an increasing number of people are not satisfied with their jobs , especially those people aged between 41 and 50 . In the table above , the highest percentage at 64% stands for the proportion of the staff aged between 41 and 50 who are not satisfied with their jobs. On the contrary , the percentage of those over 50 accounts only for 10% . Isolated and simple as the figures in the chart seem , yet its connotation should be taken into careful consideration.

​ What exactly contributes to this phenomenon ? It's a thought-provoking question. To begin with, work pressure for people between the age of 41 and 50 might exert great influence on the job dissatisfaction. A recent Internet questionnaire of the Chinese Academy of Social Sciences indicates that approximately 86.6% of the respondents hold the same view. In addition , lack of opportunities for them ( staff aged between 41 and 50 ) might also cause the problem. As Edward ZlotKowski, director of community service at Bentley College in Massachusetts , puts it , "lack of opportunities , under any circumstance , tends to be of enormous detriment for staff ."

​ Judging from the analysis above , we may safely come to the conclusion that the severe problem demands effective counter-measures, First and foremost , the government should formulate better laws and regulations to improve their working environment. Plus, company should cultivate a better awareness of it and channel actions. Only in this way would we be bound for an end to this trend.

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